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posted March 7th, 2017, 5:43 pm


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March 7th, 2017, 5:43 pm

Kotokot

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I'm sorry if there are any mistakes, but I'm adding it before my friend would check it. I want to add as many pages as I can, because I'll be on holidays later.

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March 7th, 2017, 6:17 pm

Dancing Brony

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@Kotokot: It's actually perfect. Both the art and the English.

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March 8th, 2017, 1:47 am

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Ooh sexy!

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March 8th, 2017, 7:51 am

Poppy

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All good, you just need to add a 'the'before bedroom. And it's l'd rather not I. Other than that your all sweet! :)

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March 8th, 2017, 1:07 pm

Xaryna

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I don't really want to say it because the art is SO LOVELY but his earring is wrong in the 4th panel.

BUT I LOVE YOU ANYWAY *Throws cookies and runs off*

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March 9th, 2017, 8:34 am

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@Xaryna: *catch cookies* no problem don't be scared to tell me when I do mistake xD thank you for letting me know

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March 9th, 2017, 6:40 am

portisHeart

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yea, let's! ^^

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March 9th, 2017, 8:09 pm

SomiJuli

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Aw! So cute. And that last panel is really well done. Earlobe nibbling...hot.

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